Kindle Vella

I have no stake in Kindle Vella. This article is to inform other writers, not to advertise an Amazon product. One of the problems with self-publishing is getting noticed. Even…

Less is More

One of the first things we learn about writing is the old saying, “Less is More.” In keeping with this simple truth, the opposite is true: “More is Less.” More…

Over Telling

One of my current works in progress (WIP) is The Ship from Wolfskill, a steampunk-ish tale of a levitating riverboat. As I discussed in my earlier blog about backstory, sometimes…

Em Dash

The em dash ( — ) is a handy way to show a character has paused. In the blog “Better Dialog,” I mentioned that “Mother” has a tell in her…

Don’t Hurry

When writing a book, there are no shortcuts. One time an author, speaking at a writer’s conference, told this story: Minnie McGillacutty, and author of a lengthy series, remarked that…

Better Dialog

Killing Tags Tags are the little identifiers, telling the reader who is talking. One of the cardinal rules in writing is “show, don’t tell.” Tags like, “said Kate,” tell us…